The Tortoise and the Hare V6
The omniscient point of view includes the dialogue, actions, and thoughts of everyone. It's a hard point of view to write from without it being confusing. It's easier to describe the dialogue and action of everyone from a third person point of view, and even include the thoughts of a single character, but it can be weird to know the thoughts of everyone. I want to play with it. The Tortoise and the Hare V6.0 Tortoise was walking down the path to the lake thinking about a book he wanted to finish reading before work the next day when he saw Hare and Fox talking with each other up ahead. "Oh boy," he thought, "these guys." Hare and Fox, seeming to sense Tortoise looking at them, turned to look at him too. Hare thought, "What a weird guy." and said to Fox, "I can't believe this guy still hangs around here." Fox laughed and said, "Yeah, look at how slow he walks. You should race him." thinking that it would be funny. Tortoise wa...